Feedback from pupils on my double page spread.

I asked Paul Deakin about what he thought about my double page spread and to give me feedback. He said that the layout was good but that he didn't like the picture of the lad. This is because it is a rubbish picture. Paul said to improve i should replicate the image of the girl so it looks like they are competing against each other. This will link in with the story that i have got. He also said that the colour for the lad interview doesn't look good on the blue background. But the blue background it good because it is throughout the magazine that shows the profession and consistency.