Feedback for my contents page

I asked Ben Murphy what he thought of my contents and he thought that the text was boring on my contents and that it was too big for the contents page. But he said that the background looks very good as it looks professional and consistent. Ben said that the pictures were good and he liked how they both had a glow on them to make the picture stand out so they are eye catching. But the picture of amy can be improved fixing the red eye. This will make it seem more professional and conventional to a proper music magazine.